That’s a nice long story with lots of twists and turns. There were a couple of minor grammatical errors and the improper use of double quotes near the bullet points. I like the cute/naughty organization as it helps me find my place without overcomplicating things. It sounds very vanilla tbh, but I guess D is that kind of guy. To me, dad body jerk-off isn’t exactly the sexiest thing, but I’m sure to some people it’s really hot. (I didn’t watch the bonus video but I’m sure people will appreciate it.)