• sbv@sh.itjust.works
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    3 days ago
    • The first phrase (at the top) talks about being part of a series, rather than the purpose of the doc. That should go at the end.
    • the image in the middle looks like it’s describing use cases, but the cases and significance to the reader aren’t clear. What is DRM? What is profit share? What is a credit system? Why should the reader care?
    • why are library apps in a rectangle, but the others in circles?
    • “Environmental” has an icon, but it doesn’t seem to be used anywhere.
    • would the bubbles with icons look better if they were left justified?
    • the “need help choosing” block is the most understandable: it lists interests and an appropriate suggestion.